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| CATEGORY | 4 - Above Standards | 3 - Meets Standards | 2 - Approaching Standards | 1 - Below Standards |
| Position Statement | The position statement provides a clear, strong statement of the author's position on the topic. | The position statement provides a clear statement of the author's position on the topic. | A position statement is present, but does not make the the author's position clear. | There is no position statement. |
| Focus or Thesis Statement | The thesis statement names the topic of the essay and outlines the main points to be discussed. | The thesis statement names the topic of the essay. | The thesis statement outlines some or all of the main points to be discussed but does not name the topic. | The thesis statement does not name the topic AND does not preview what will be discussed. |
| Support for Position | Includes 10 or more pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. The writer anticipates the reader's concerns, biases or arguments and has provided at least 1 counter-argument. | Includes 8 or more pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. | Includes 6 pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. | Includes 4 or fewer pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences). |
| Evidence and Examples | All of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant and explanations are given that show how each piece of evidence supports the author's position. | Most of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant and explanations are given that show how each piece of evidence supports the author's position. | At least one of the pieces of evidence and examples is relevant and has an explanation that shows how that piece of evidence supports the author's position. | Evidence and examples are NOT relevant AND/OR are not explained. |
| Sequencing | Arguments and support are provided in a logical order that makes it easy and interesting to follow the author's train of thought. | Arguments and support are provided in a fairly logical order that makes it reasonably easy to follow the author's train of thought. | A few of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem a little confusing. | Many of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem very confusing. |
| Transitions | A variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how ideas are connected | Transitions show how ideas are connected, but there is little variety | Some transitions work well, but some connections between ideas are fuzzy. | The transitions between ideas are unclear OR nonexistant. |
| Sources | All sources used for quotes, statistics and facts are credible and cited correctly in the bibliography. | All sources used for quotes, statistics and facts are credible and most are cited correctly in the bibliography. | Most sources used for quotes, statistics and facts are credible and cited correctly in the bibliography. | Many sources are suspect (not credible) AND/OR are not cited correctly in the bibliography. |
| Audience | Demonstrates a clear understanding of the potential reader and uses appropriate vocabulary and arguments. Anticipates reader's questions and provides thorough answers appropriate for that audience. | Demonstrates a general understanding of the potential reader and uses vocabulary and arguments appropriate for that audience. | Demonstrates some understanding of the potential reader and uses arguments appropriate for that audience. | It is not clear who the author is writing for. |
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